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Speaking to me of love…

Posted on Thursday, October 1, 2009 7:13 AM | By: डॉ. महफूज़ अली (Dr. Mahfooz Ali)

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As all things surrounding me begin to dry,
 a subtle scent of pine permeates the air,
 like the fleeting perfume of a lover,
 or the wisp of a memory touching.........
My heart, 
like a brass urn overflowing
 with rose petals mottled red and white,
 still searches for a brightness I never knew 
 your eyes, speaking to me of love…

Comments (24)

स्वप्न मञ्जूषा said on October 1, 2009 at 8:09 AM

your eyes, speaking to me of love

LOVELY ..!!
Girish Kumar Billore said on October 17, 2009 at 12:29 PM

दीप की स्वर्णिम आभा
आपके भाग्य की और कर्म
की द्विआभा.....
युग की सफ़लता की
त्रिवेणी
आपके जीवन से ही आरम्भ हो
मंगल कामना के साथ
Asha Joglekar said on October 21, 2009 at 7:49 AM

I came to this blog for the first time. Your English writing is soooooooooooo indepth, touching the heart.
पी.सी.गोदियाल "परचेत" said on October 23, 2009 at 8:32 PM

like a brass urn overflowing
with rose petals mottled red and white,
still searches for a brightness I never knew

Buitiful, Ali sahab
ओम आर्य said on October 23, 2009 at 11:46 PM
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ओम आर्य said on October 23, 2009 at 11:47 PM

eyes never speak a lie................
Unknown said on November 2, 2009 at 4:52 PM

Dear MahfooZ I can visualize everything.
Nicely written.
Anonymous said on November 3, 2009 at 6:26 PM

love lorn hearts cry:(
Meenu Khare said on November 7, 2009 at 1:57 AM

Brilliant Expressions.
पंकज said on November 7, 2009 at 8:41 AM

beautiful feelings expressed thru poem. greetings.
Anonymous said on November 17, 2009 at 10:36 AM

Mahfooz ji I just loved the pics of two cute puppies on top of this page!!
& I m not a connoisseur of english poems but yes i liked the emotions..you're mostly romantic,though I you didn't tell what inspires you. For me, life is a romance..
pooja said on December 2, 2009 at 8:53 PM

very nice...keep it up
निर्मला कपिला said on December 20, 2009 at 4:51 AM

बहुत सुन्दर पहली बार देखा है ये ब्लाग । शुभकामनायें
Dr. Tripat Mehta said on January 2, 2010 at 2:18 AM

your eyes, speaking to me of love…
wonderfully expressed...
really loving ur thoughts...Keep it up!
monali said on February 4, 2010 at 4:54 AM

Touching...
Fauziya Reyaz said on February 10, 2010 at 12:11 AM

very loving and sweet poem...
पश्यंती शुक्ला. said on May 14, 2010 at 3:27 AM

its my first visit to ur blog bt i think ur heart touching word composition wil attract me to come again here to understand ur memeories of love...Nice visit. Nice Poem. Simple bt touching.
Dr. Tripat Mehta said on May 24, 2010 at 8:10 AM

so sweet :)
beautiful words

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Asha Lata Saxena said on June 18, 2010 at 8:21 AM

A nice poem
asha
ZEAL said on June 20, 2010 at 2:12 AM

beautiful creation !
Akanksha Yadav said on July 8, 2010 at 2:12 AM

Wonderful...Congts !!
ZEAL said on August 26, 2010 at 8:04 PM

read it again...beautiful !
KK Yadav said on September 21, 2010 at 9:34 PM

Nice creation...keep it up..congts.
वन्दना महतो ! (Bandana Mahto) said on December 13, 2010 at 2:37 PM

pehli baar aayi hun, aur itna achcha lag raha hai aapke poems ko padhkar ki kya kahun?

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